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    Unreserved berth

    September 21, 2010 by Avant-Garde

    Screwed! That’s what you feel when you are late for a train and stacked in Mumbai’s Traffic Jam. Even though I was a bit late I managed to get into moving training with my luggage. I started my journey towards my compartment when I realized the fact that I’m inside the train. I made my evening walk through train to find my seat 8 in S4.

                    There is something common in guys who travel frequently in train. They always have dream of a hot sexy chick to chat with. But most times, I would like to say maybe every time; they end up with some senior citizens entertaining them. I think that’s the magic of Indian railway booking system. Any was as usual I got my co traveler a 55 year old village lady. It wasn’t so surprising for me that she filled all possible places available with her luggage.   I had to fight with her to sit on my seat because according to her I’m supposed to sit on upper berth.

                    While the train had a pause in Surat, honey trembling hot came into the train and took the seat on my left side. Even though she is the reason for the story, I still have two questions. Did she take the seat because it was free or did she take because it was free and it’s next to me? Any way as I said there is one more thing which is common in guys who dream about these sexy girls. They won’t be able to talk if any angels materialize next to them. I planned a million ways to start a talk with her while the times dashed so that it was late for an introduction.

    She asked me to plug-in her mobile charger to the plug near to me. With no second thought I took it from her and plugged it to the switch box. I tried to touch her hand and it felt so soft which drove my dreams so high.  I took this as an introduction so that I could smile each time she checks the phone for calls or messages.

                    I was ogling her as her which gave goose pimple shot each time I look at her Meanwhile TTR came in and asked for the ticket. I gave mine for verification whereas she told TTR that she couldn’t take ticket as she was on hurry. So she paid the fine and got a temporary seat.

                    As the train continued heading to Ahmadabad with the normal pace a huge sound came from somewhere like a blast of bomb. She suddenly hold my hand so tight leaning towards my body. I could feel her silky soft body on my arm. She hold me tight until she realized people around us are looking at her. I took this as a start, asking her name, about the travel and then about the reason why she is travelling without the ticket.

                    Time fluttered as we talked and when I came to know that, she doesn’t have a boyfriend right now, our topic of interests widened. In between we had our dinner and at 8.00PM the lady wanted to sleep. So I shifted my seat to the one beside her. The longer we talked the closer we became, both mentally and physically. After an hour she had her hand on my thighs while explaining her previous relationships stories.

                    We talked about culture, places, job, science, investments, love, travelling till 12.00 when the owners of the seats we were using came in. I had no problem as I had a reserved berth but she had to either find one unreserved berth, which seemed to be impossible, or sit near the toilet door and sleep. So I made an offer for her. I told her I can allow her to sit on my berth but only on one condition that she will have to entertain me over the night. Even though it was a blind shot she took that offer. I guess she had no other option.

                    We sat side by side on the upper berth keeping our shoulder bags on the other corner. We talked, we played some small games, I showed her some magic, and we talked, talked and talked. It was getting colder and colder as time dazzled. I took out my blanket and asked her whether she want to share. It was too cold that she couldn’t resist getting into my blanket. I was confused on the fact whether it’s her hot body or my hot dreams which kept me warm.

                    The subjects changed from common to personal, technical to relations. We were more over like a single body with two souls both looking each other into eyes. It was unexpected when we ran out of words and still we remained looking each other. She came closer and closer that I could see her red glossy lips burning with fire. My heart started pounding so fast while I could feel her heart beat too. She didn’t stop coming to me while I closed my eyes when she crush down her lips on mine. Neither did we move nor did we stop. We continued with that mesmerizing blessing through which we shared our thoughts.

                    It was 2.00 AM when I found her on me having her best sleep she ever had. 6.30 AM I woke up leaving her in my magical blanket. I sat beside her feet till she woke up. At 7.30 she came back after having a brush. She was looking fantastic even in that sleepy mess. We continued our talk while I brought her a coffee.

                    8.15 My station arrived and I had to leave. I took back the blanket from which still has her memory on it. With great antipathy I left the train. I walked away from the moving train through the platform thinking only about best train journey I ever had with a great regret that I couldn’t  ask her contact number.


    19 Responses to “Unreserved berth”

    1. for gods sake plz dont tell me that you were awake till 2.00am infront of any blonde.

      Comment by Cyriac — September 22, 2010 @ 2:07 pm

    2. Sorry about that. kindly read it once more. Some portions have been updated. You read it before i finish it.

      Comment by Avant-Garde — September 22, 2010 @ 2:32 pm

    3. nice writing man…liked it…

      Comment by Jojo Joson — September 22, 2010 @ 3:51 pm

    4. loved it man, seriously even i have the dilemma of how to start and ended up staring her and nothing else many times.
      rarely i mean RARELY, she starts or u get something u can start a conversation on…..

      Comment by cheriachen — September 22, 2010 @ 4:14 pm

    5. soft po_n

      Comment by martin jacob — September 24, 2010 @ 4:33 pm

    6. @ jojo : thanks
      @ cheriachen : Its all about the start which matters!

      Comment by Avant-Garde — September 24, 2010 @ 5:18 pm

    7. Question 1. Is this a true story?

      Comment by Sidharth — September 24, 2010 @ 8:40 pm

    8. a very good read. :)

      Comment by TheAnand — September 24, 2010 @ 10:41 pm

    9. Nice Read…

      Glad that it didnt end up in an “Unanticipated Birth” :P

      Comment by Ashwin — September 25, 2010 @ 12:05 am

    10. Good.. Good way of writing.. i felt like i am reading a Chetan Bhagat novel.

      Comment by Alex Jose — September 25, 2010 @ 11:46 am

    11. @siddharth: I leave that part to readers guess!!
      @anand & aswin: thanks!

      Comment by Avant-Garde — September 27, 2010 @ 8:58 am

    12. it smells the love you are in search of……..while reading frm the beginning there is a hint of suspense which makes us to read till the end thts wat is needed for a good author. good work man do well and write many.let god be with you. and dont forget to get the contact details next time ok hehehehehe…………..

      Comment by loverboy aka vinu thomas — September 28, 2010 @ 10:18 am

    13. @vinu: thanks.. i will surely take care of that!

      Comment by Avant-Garde — September 28, 2010 @ 11:30 am

    14. kenny,

      Might have gone for a re-read. There are phrases that just lost its meaning due to errors. It would have been a great piece of erotica if not for the old woman and the errors.

      Good work,
      Cheers

      Comment by jaykay — January 11, 2011 @ 4:02 pm

    15. some are purposfully made mistakes.. and
      @jaykay.. read ones more.. its not the old lady.. its an young beauty..

      Comment by Avant-Garde — January 27, 2011 @ 4:17 pm

    16. its…just amazing ..reading like chetan bhagat novel..
      Even i am regularly coming in a train every week..so it will be helpful for me to handle such kind of situation…..which as said above generally not happen……
      but its a very nice one….Keep it up Joy..!!!!

      Comment by Hardik — February 9, 2011 @ 2:08 pm

    17. nice way of writing………………………
      by the way is it true story?
      and if true then SALE NUMBER TO LE LIYA HOTA…………………

      Comment by Neelkamal — February 9, 2011 @ 2:17 pm

    18. Abey saley atleast email-id to lena tha anyway i like the story and the way you write man… !!!
      it’s really great…

      Comment by Bhishan — February 28, 2011 @ 2:18 pm

    19. Is it real story? Tumhe dekhke lagta to nahi he k ye real story he…. varna tum cell number lena kabhi nai bhulte…

      Comment by Shraddha — July 21, 2011 @ 1:29 pm

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